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10 Website Reminders for the New Year

1/10/2017

 
Happy New Year from Luminary Works
Now that you’ve finished ringing in the new year, take a minute to review your company’s website. While some of these editorial changes occur with the advent of the new year, it’s also an excellent opportunity to update other evergreen areas that often get overlooked. 

Consider these ten suggestions a basic Q1 checkup. While you’re at it—why not add a calendar reminder for each quarter, or at least once a year? Then you can rest assured that your site is always representing you at your best: up-to-date and error-free.  Or, get help from Luminary Works with our budget-friendly Website Review service. 

1. Copyright Year: If you list a year or range of years with your website’s copyright notice, update it for 2017. The same concept applies if you have digital templates (like email templates) that include copyright dates. Update those so that your future content includes the correct date or date range. 

2. Years in Business: If your website boasts the fact that your business has been around for something like 13 years, over five years, or more than a decade, make sure the numerical reference is accurate. 

3. About Pages: If your “About” section lists key employees, financial stats, locations, or other details, double check to ensure that the information is correct. 

4. Legal: Ensure the accuracy of details such as the contact information listed in your legal agreements (Privacy Policy, Visitor Agreement, Terms of Sale, etc.). Some companies only list a mailing address while others also include a generic email address or a specific person’s email address. If you list a specific person (which I wouldn't recommend), make sure they are still a current employee and that this topic continues to be their responsibility. 

5. Meta Data: For your homepage and other key pages, take a look at the meta title and meta description. These appear in search engine results, so they need to be spot-on. 

6. Images: Review your website’s images. Because you can’t do a “search and replace” to update them, they are often forgotten when it comes to annual updates. Also, double-check for typos, as these are often missed in images.

7. Social Media: Review your company’s description in each profile (Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, LinkedIn, etc.) to ensure that the information is correct. Also, check that the links from your website to each social profile function properly.

8. Other Sites: In addition to the typical social media sites, don’t forget to check other ancillary systems that display info about your business. Things like Google Maps, career sites, reservation systems, email newsletter systems, and any other system where you have a profile.

9. Tech-Savvy Words: Language evolves quickly, especially "tech words." Unfortunately, this evolution can make your site look dreadfully old-school if you're not changing with the times. Update spelling, hyphenation, and even capitalization of key words such as email (not e-mail), website (not web site or Website), blog (not weblog), and online (not on-line). Also consider other terms that are more subjective, including eCommerce and mCommerce (or e-commerce and m-commerce). Overall, strive for consistency.

10. Bonus Features: And don't forget about functionality. Links should work! Your site should load quickly. Make sure your site works seamlessly on a smartphone. And, bonus points if the pages on your site can be printed—yep, on real paper with a printer—with the important elements intact and with proper formatting. 

Now, get back to having a wonderful and successful 2017!

Happy New Year from Luminary Works!

12/31/2016

 
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​Happy New Year from Luminary Works! #WordNerd

Wishing You Happy Holidays from Luminary Works!

12/24/2016

 
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Wishing you a happy holiday season! #Peace #Joy #Hope #Love #WordNerd

Don’t Let Typos Undermine Your Expertise & Marketability

11/9/2016

 
Allow me to share a story with you.

Recently, I was looking for an accountant to help me set up my accounting software (Xero). On its website, this particular accounting firm had a nice design and prided itself on being tech-savvy. Sounds great, right? Well, yes… except that so many things about the website felt contrary to that tech-savvy mentality they were trying to sell me on.

Specifically, the word choice throughout the site was anything but tech-savvy and other areas were just downright unprofessional in their carelessness. A few examples—also included in the slideshow below:
  • Tech-savvy was misspelled on their homepage (Really, you ask? YES, REALLY!)
  •  Its was misspelled as it’s multiple times.
  • Proactive was hyphenated as pro-active. Startup (as in a startup software business) was hyphenated as start-up. In many cases, hyphenating tech words instantly signals that you are old school and out of touch. Even the Associated Press has given up the hyphen in lieu of simply email.
  • Ironically, adjectives such as real-time or cloud-based—as in real-time reports and cloud-based software—lacked the necessary hyphen.
  • This line regarding their “Professional Services” really blew me away (errors in bold): You also have to be conscience of how nexus will effect your requirements for sales tax, payroll, and income tax compliance.
  • Unfortunately, more errors continued...

So I didn’t contact this accounting company. Maybe they are amazingly tech-savvy but hired the wrong copywriter. Taking time to vet them seemed like a waste of my time. It was quicker and easier to find someone else (whose website had only one typo, which I gently pointed out).

I know better than to think that everyone is a word nerd like myself. However, most people learn these basic rules at a young age. Subconsciously or consciously, they recognize when something is off. Doubt and distrust enters the picture. You're trying to sell them on a message, but they realize that something is wrong—is it your purported area of expertise or simply your grammar? Will they stick around long enough to find out, or just click away to the next competitor?

Moral of the story: Don’t let poor copywriting—whether it be word choice, grammar, punctuation, or misspellings—undermine your expertise and your marketability.

Solutions? A few come to mind...
  • Run spell check. This catches SO MANY errors!
  • Get a fresh set of competent eyes to review things. Key word being competent.
  • Hire Luminary Works to do a Website Review or other proofreading project for you.
  • Talk with Luminary Works about doing a custom workshop to improve your communications. These actionable tips and tricks are perfect for small groups of employees, industry events, online learning events, etc... 

Trick or Treat? Big, Bad, Scary Hyphenated Words—Oh My!

10/31/2016

 
Trick or Treat? The dreaded hyphen is out to get you this Halloween! Folks just can’t win when it comes to hyphens. 

Hyphens can be complicated–and subjective. To hyphenate or not to hyphenate? It often depends on how the words are being used in the sentence. A style guide (like Chicago Style) or grammar book will come in handy (or hire an editor or proofreader!). For a quick overview, I recommend this online reference from GrammarBook.com. This checklist might also help you review your writing:
  • Do you need the hyphens you’ve used? Ensure you're using hyphens correctly.
  • For your hyphenated words, ensure that unnecessary spaces have not been inserted before or after the hyphen.
  • Are there any words or phrases that are missing the necessary hyphenation?
  • Are your hyphenated words clear? Or would the sentence benefit from different word choice or a rewrite?

Here are a few examples (with my notations) from some business websites I ran across recently. Unfortunately, I often encounter these types of errors on the homepage and other primary pages, such as About Us, Services, etc... I’ve blurred some of the text to prevent embarrassment. These errors are easy to make–but also easy to correct. They are proof that even simple website copy needs a fresh set of eyes for quality assurance. It’s exactly why Luminary Works offers its Website Review service as a budget-friendly option to ensure your site shines with top-notch professionalism!
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​Don’t let bad grammar and punctuation play tricks on you. Let your error-free message be the ultimate treat for your customers!

Happy Halloween from Luminary Works!

Let's Celebrate! It's National Day on Writing.

10/20/2016

 
Did you know October 20 is National Day on Writing? Created by the National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE), this special day “celebrates the importance, joy, and evolution of writing.” Look for a flurry of tweets using the hashtag #WhyIWrite.

Whether you’re a writer of books, blogs, or business reports, take time to reflect on the quality of your writing. Is it clearly written? Is it free of spelling errors and other blunders?  Will it achieve your objective? Will it resonate with your audience?

If you’re trying to improve your writing, consider the guidance from these books. They will help to ensure that your “practice makes perfect” rather than “practice makes problematic habits.”
  • Strunk & White’s The Elements of Style by William Strunk Jr. and E. B. White
  • Writing Tools: 55 Essential Strategies for Every Writer by Roy Peter Clark
  • The Sense of Style: The Thinking Person's Guide to Writing in the 21st Century by Steve Pinker
  • Chicago Manual of Style--this reference book has an excellent section, Word Usage, that covers commonly misused words and how to use them correctly. I always learn something knew when perusing this section.

When it comes to writing, follow Nike’s advice and “just do it!” Write. Edit. Repeat. Happy National Day on Writing!

Reminder: Budget for Clear Communications for 2017

10/12/2016

 
Having a clear, concise, error-free website is imperative. Even better, it doesn’t have to break the bank – or your budget. 

Consider allocating a small amount in your 2017 budget for editorial services. When is the last time someone reviewed your website (or your “evergreen” printed marketing materials)? I frequently spot mistakes in these areas—even ones that spell check would catch. While minor errors may not be the end of the world, their presence subconsciously lowers your level of professionalism to your customers and prospects. When you’re trying to close the deal, doubt is the last thing you want standing in the way.

Depending on the size of your site or your printed pieces, editorial reviews can be completed quickly, which translates to inexpensively. That fresh set of eyes makes all the difference, and your prospects can keep their eye on the prize. 

If you’re interested in getting a quote specific to your project, let me know.

Lost in Translation: Mind Your Head

10/5/2016

 
"Mind Your Head" sign at the short doorway at the temple ruins in Siem Reap, Cambodia.
Signs—especially those in foreign countries where English is not the native language—are often ripe for editorial correction. This “Mind Your Head” sign from Cambodia isn’t incorrect; it simply isn’t what we would expect to see in America. Particularly, the verb “Mind” evokes a British approach (Mind the Gap). Other common signage wording comes to mind:
  • Caution: Watch Your Head
  • Danger: Low Clearance
  • Low Headroom

Still, I love this photo and its presumably unintended double meaning: “Mind Your Head.” Don’t run into things or give yourself a concussion. And, take care to fill your head with knowledge, positive thoughts, and new experiences (like visiting Cambodia’s magnificent temples and ruins!). 

5 Quick Reminders for National Punctuation Day

9/24/2016

 
​In honor of National Punctuation Day, remember these five quick reminders to make sure your messages are spot on:
  1. Decades: They are not possessive. Therefore, don't give them an apostrophe. "In the 1970s" not "In the 1970's."
  2. Frequently Asked Questions: Again, not possessive regardless of whether you write it out or abbreviate it. "FAQs" not "FAQ's."
  3. Commas in a Series: I prefer the Oxford comma for ultimate clarity and easy consistency. Oxford style means that a comma is always used before the conjunction for commas in a series. AP style, almost always used for newspaper journalism, usually omits the final comma. Oxford Example: Atlanta neighborhoods include Virginia Highlands, Morningside, Ansley Park, and Piedmont Heights. Whatever style you choose, just use it consistently.
  4. Punctuation & Quotes: Punctuation at the end of a sentence goes inside the quote (unless you're in Britain). Example: I asked, "What were they thinking?" See, the question mark is inside the double quotation.
  5. Contractions versus Possessive Pronouns: Last but not least, these frequently misused words always deserve repeating.  Double check your use of it's/its, you're/your, who's/whose. Let spell check and grammar check help you!

If you're itching for more helpful reminders, I like this 16-point list from Inc.com.

HBR makes the case for better business writing

9/13/2016

 
A wonderful article from Harvard Business Review about the impact of bad business writing and how it is ruining productivity. 

Bad Writing Is Destroying Your Company’s Productivity
By Josh Bernoff

Enjoy!
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